Il Cuore Solitario (The Lonely Heart)
A loyal basilica guardian finds his routine shattered by a mysterious, hooded figure
STORY
Lorenzo Valentino stood at his post, back straight, arms at his sides. Only his eyes moved as they scanned the area around him. The reddened sunlight eased through the arched openings, casting elongated shadows of the decorative marble statues. He knew them well. He knew all of the shadows that accompanied the late evening hours of the basilica.
For three years, since his wife’s death, Lorenzo had fought his loneliness with these shifts. This basilica, where they had once married, was the only place he hoped would bring him some measure of peace. The smell of old stone, the cool touch of marble beneath his hand – these were small comforts. He revealed his true motive to no one. To others, he was simply dedicated, a loyal guardian of the basilica.
Long after everyone had left that night, he heard footsteps. They patted against the ornate floor – soft, slow, and deliberate, imbued with a solemn quietness. He peered towards the sound, estimating that its source would emerge from behind the shadow of a four-foot cherub. And it did.
A figure clad in a black hooded robe appeared. The hood’s uppermost edge obscured the eyes, revealing only a pale nose and barely pink, thin lips almost indistinguishable from the rest of the face.
Lorenzo wiggled his toes, ensuring he could move quickly if needed.
A left arm lifted; two fingers emerged tentatively from the robe’s cuff, forming the sign of the cross before the figure crossed the threshold.
Lorenzo squinted, trying to discern if the visitor was man or woman through the remaining light and swirling dust motes. He should notify them that visiting hours were over, just as he had done hundreds of times before. If the head priest found a stranger here, Lorenzo could lose the job that was his only sanctuary. But his feet remained rooted to the spot. He opened his mouth to greet the visitor – “Buona sera...” – but no sound escaped. Puzzled, he mentally checked his body, from head to toe, clenching and releasing muscles, trying to ensure everything was functioning.
The figure had moved further down the aisle, between the pews, now humming a hymn. The sound, soft with a dry, crackling edge, confirmed to Lorenzo that it was a woman. She continued her walk with a slow determination, as if she had nowhere else to be.
Lorenzo had never seen anyone like her. Her presence unsettled him; he patted the hairs on his forearm and took a step forward, then stopped, turning to watch her fully.
She knelt on the carpet leading to the altar. The humming ceased, replaced by whispers that were just audible, echoing faintly off the basilica walls. Lorenzo listened intently, trying to decipher the words, but could only make out a few. Italian, he discerned from the few words he understood. Soon, she finished whispering those words and, just as she had entered, began to leave. Lorenzo, torn between a curious urge to know who she was and a compassionate desire to let her have her moment, watched her go. He couldn’t see her eyes, but he imagined them fixed downward, guiding her steps.
No other visitor came that night. Lorenzo resumed his post, watching as the shadows shifted, lengthening in the opposite direction with the sunrise. He thought he wouldn’t see the woman again, but she returned the next night, and the night after that, too.
Each night, it was the same quiet drama: the soft footsteps, the fingers making the sign of the cross, the slow walk down the aisle as she hummed the hymn, the kneeling, the whispered words, and the departure afterwards. And each night, Lorenzo patted his forearm. She never acknowledged his presence. He withheld the urge to clear his throat and alert her that he was there. His stomach twisted at the thought of interrupting her.
Lorenzo became determined to meet this woman, to see the eyes hidden beneath the hood, to understand her woe and what she sought. That evening, hearing her footsteps once more, he stepped forward from his post, smoothing the wrinkles from his shirt. His rubber soles muffled his movements. He had planned to speak to her at the door but found himself remaining shrouded in the shadows of the cherub.
He listened to the hymn, and her voice seemed to resonate throughout his whole body. He felt a tremor in his ribs, and held his breath, exhaling slowly, only as she inhaled. Her whispers were clearer now, too. In the desperate cadence of her whispered pleas, he recognized the exact pitch of his own midnight prayers, a specific grief that mirrored the one he kept caged inside himself.
She finished, and as she turned to leave, he stepped from the shadows. He offered a soft word of understanding, allowing her to see the shared sorrow in his eyes before slowly extending his hands. A sudden warmth washed over him, and he understood something beyond articulation – a divine moment perhaps, easing his lonely heart and quieting the unease in his mind.
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Author’s Note
This story was conceptualized by a writing prompt at Dominican University of California’s MFA band practice.
The Story Behind the Story
When I Googled images of a basilica, I was amazed by the architecture, most of these were in Italy. This made for a great setting, which is why I gave it the Italian translation of Il Cuore Solitario.
We have this gothic place and a grieving man who wants to be alone with these thoughts and memories of his wife. What better way to spend time grieving than to sleep during the day when the world is awake and then continue a vigil during the night shift as the lone guard.
This is where I get an image of Batman the Animated Series. The cartoon was drawn on black background, not white—so the mood was already stark; add Batman’s penchant for observing the world from the shadows—also, while grieving and processing trauma. The way that show depicted day and night is what I called upon to illustrate the movement of time via shadows.
The tension comes from a hooded figure and his response. It is very measured and based on a shared emphatic bond of grief.
Beta readers wanted a happy ending, maybe one where the two get together, but life isn’t like that. Sometimes our loss, our grief, our traumas become so ingrained that they become an extension of us. You begin to see others like you and there is an unspoken bond, a subtle nod, a knowing glance as the world reminds you that you aren’t alone.
I like to think that he never returned to work at nights and found some resolution in knowing that his internal emotional and mental state was acceptable, and once acknowledged, it was time to pick up the pieces and try to live again.
I’m not sure about the woman. Perhaps she took his spot, humming a hymn nightly at the altar.
Thanks for joining me At the Peripheral Edge, until next time.
-Daniel
"he recognized the exact pitch of his own midnight prayers" — that's the sentence the whole story is moving toward.
the batman animated series note in the author's note is unexpected and completely earns its place. shadows as a grief medium makes more sense than most literary devices i've seen used for the same thing.