30 Dolls
Beatrice was confined to her bed, desperate for a world beyond her surgical recovery. But when three of her thirty dolls started talking.
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Beatrice was confined to her bed, desperate for a world beyond her surgical recovery. But when three of her thirty dolls started talking—one whispering caution, one demanding adventure—she had to decide if playing it safe was worth losing her sanity.
30 Dolls by Daniel R. Mangru
Three weeks after surgery, confined to bed, Beatrice snapped, “Agnes, if you tell me one more time to use this saline solution, I’m stuffing you back in the box.” She squeezed her eyes shut. “It burns and tastes like pennies.”
Tap, tap, tap went Agnes’s porcelain knees. “Careful, dear, don’t strain yourself. The doctor said…”
“Yeah, yeah, ‘no strenuous activity,’” Beatrice mimicked in her high-pitched, seventh grade voice. Last week, her parents argued across the hallway when they discovered she had tried walking to the kitchen by herself. “I can’t even get outta bed, but even walking to the bathroom is ‘strenuous activity.’”
“Don’t worry ‘bout that, Bea!” a rough voice boomed from the other side of the bed. Reginald, the rag doll with the button eye and a pirate hat, revealed a bright red lollipop instead of offering another doctor’s solution. “Come on, up and at ‘em! We got a whole pirate cove to explore with your little friends.”
Agnes gasped. “Absolutely not! You know she’s supposed to rest, Reginald.”
Anger jolted through Beatrice. “It’s not like I enjoy lying here all day. Watching everyone else play outside, like the other girls, with friends, doing kid things.” She sighed, making a small, feeble effort, and placed her hands in her lap. Dust motes floated like leaves in the sunbeams, slicing through the window, placing tiny spotlights on her loneliness. About thirty dolls filled her room, their glassy unblinking eyes forming a silent audience to her misery. While Agnes, Reginald, and Luna spoke up, the others just stared, silent companions in her confinement.
“Strenuous activity or not, Bea gotta make something!” Reginald jammed the lollipop into Beatrice’s hand. “Here! A sweet treat for energy!”
Agnes’s knees clicked together at a quick pace. “You know sugar doesn’t work well with your…”
“Knock it off, Agnes, or I’ll get mom’s potpourri sash and rub it all over you,” Beatrice said. Agnes placed her hands between her knees and subdued their clicking.
“Hah, that right, Bea, own it,” Reginald said.
Beatrice rolled one leg off the bed. “Ow, bad move.” She was slow to bring her leg back under the covers.
Beatrice glanced over at Luna, sitting still at the foot of the bed. Luna’s oversized glasses almost slipped off her nose as she thumbed through a miniature, worn book. She never said much. Just watched.
“What are you reading now, Luna?” Beatrice asked, while soothing her leg.
Luna spoke slowly. Her voice, when it came, was barely above a whisper. “A dictionary.”
“Why a dictionary?”
“Words… they can take you away, Bea. To anywhere, to be anyone, to do anything.”
Agnes wrung her porcelain hands. “We just want you to be safe, dear. It’s for your own good.”
“How you going to play it safe if you never even check to see if you can do something on your own?” Reginald asked.
“Safe,” Beatrice whispered. “That’s all everyone cares about. Safe, safe, safe.” The pain in her leg was a burning cinder, each pulse throbbing to the beat of her fear. She squeezed her eyes shut and stifled a scream.
Reginald ignored her wince. “We gotta sneak her outta here!” he insisted, his mismatched button eye glinting with mischief. “Just to the porch! Fresh air, sunshine… we’ll make it an adventure!”
“Absolutely not,” Agnes gasped.
“Fine, whatever,” Beatrice said, her voice dulling as another spike of pain shot through her calf. “I couldn’t make it anyway.”
Silence descended upon the small room. Beatrice listened to the tap, tap, tap of Agnes’s knees, and the slight audible turns of Luna’s book pages. She was so tired. Tired of being careful, tired of being sick, tired of being alone to deal with her problems.
She looked out the window, longing to be out there with a palm full of birdseed, under the oak tree or at the center of the flower garden. The imagined warmth of the sun on her face was a painful phantom, taunting her with what could be. The unseen birds chirped their beckoning songs.
“It’s alright Bea, it’s ok. We are here,” Reginald said.
Agnes said nothing, but sorrow flickered in her painted eyes.
“The world is big, Beatrice,” Luna said, looking up from her book. “And it is full of endless adventures. What will you do?”
Beatrice stared up at the fluttery dust specks, each one a tiny, infinite world. She thought of the birds outside her window, of the stories they sang, and how the air from the fluttering of their wings would make her hair move across her face.
“Okay, everyone, stop talking. Just stop,” Beatrice said.
She decided if she couldn’t explore the outside world, she would rule her own. She shifted her attention to being a captive princess, plotting a grand escape. The thought wrapped around her like a warm blanket. She reached for the box of crayons on her bedside table. A golden yellow crayon felt cool and smooth in her hand. Ignoring the throbbing pain in her leg, she sketched designs for a princess crown on a scrap of paper, hoping that maybe, just maybe, the birds would come to her then to take her away.
Her breath was drawn out, pushing through the throbbing ache, listening to the birds, while mapping out the borders of her newly claimed kingdom.
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Author’s Note
This piece came from Dominican University’s MFA band practice, where a group of us gather, throw out some words into a digital hat, and use those words within our story. We write for 45 minutes and come back to read our works.
The Story Behind the Story
The origin for this story was the political climate. The message about children not needing thirty dolls for the holidays. There was also a short blurb in the news about the release date for another Toy Story.
I needed someone, somewhere, doing something: Agnes a 7th grader, in her bedroom, recovering from surgery.
A parallel in the real world is I know of a wonderful person who suffers from chronic pain—something internal but crippling when it hits. On top of this, I had my own internal issue and was confined to the house for a few weeks.
Now I needed a way to work in thirty dolls. This was easy because my kid has about thirty or more plushies, so it is plausible to have thirty types of dolls. The problem is that I have that Toy Story blurb in my head and now I need these dolls to talk.
I wasn’t going to create thirty characters with distinct voices, so I settled on six.
Beatrice (Bea) is our bedridden kid, but I wasn’t sure what she wanted. I had to think about a time when I returned from the hospital as a fourth grader. I remember being confined to the house.
The dolls would be a symbolism of her escape, like the Christmas Carol ghosts (past, present, future). These dolls would represent caution, adventure / exploration, and one that uses the power of imagination to facilitate an escape.
I didn’t have thirty dolls. I had a Knight Rider car, an Airwolf helicopter, and an F14 model airplane. So those were my coping mechanisms. The F14 was the bad guy and the two heroes, and me, were going on adventures in my room until I got hurt again. So, Reginald was a reminder to be careful
Now I couldn’t go on the ‘adventure’ the way I wanted, which meant the car and helicopter would have to go on without me. I was reduced to a stuffed puppy which represented playing it safe. I was so safe, I increased my level of sickness of boredom.
I had a bunch of books, but I’ve read those. From those old Encyclopedia Britannica’s—- not the full set, only the trial copies that the salesman would leave.
My mom would come by during lunch and dinner to leave a plate of food and a glass of something to drink, likely Kool-Aid.
To escape my confinement, not settling on thumbing through a dictionary, I began to write my own stories. But Beatrice didn’t have this option, I needed to frame her escape in entering her imagination—-something that no one can alter or restrict. This internal turn was her liberation from the doldrums of being bound to a bed with a pain that won’t let go.
While Toy Story is a tale of changing, maturing, letting things go, Beatrices dolls were her affirmation that her mind contained an escape from the physical. She was physically confined, but metaphysically free to be anyone, anywhere, doing anything.
And that is the story about the story.
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